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March 13, 2009
Writing well: Making it sing
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.
--William Wordsworth, 1770-1850
The most inspired "work moments" I've had is watching someone struggle with getting to the right word or phrase under pressure and when they are tired. The first time I saw it was watching a college daily editor--my roommate both in college and in DC for a while--struggle at 4:00 AM over a few words in the final sentences of a student reporter's story covering a public figure's on-campus speech.
The public figure had screwed the pooch; he said some goofy and impolitic things that, given his government job, he should not have said. The event was likely to draw attention from mainstream media around the country the next day. My friend still deeply cared, at four in the morning, about the writing--which was "good enough, but not quite there yet"--and it moved me. (He later worked as a reporter for two national newspapers, and wrote a best selling and well-regarded book on international trade.)
Writing is hard--especially hard for those who are good at it, or even just care about it.
Wordworth's Muse: In the Lake District, you hear "ghostly language of the ancient earth".
Even if you can't be perfect, and often you can't, please put your heart into it. Half-assed writing in any genre and in any profession--letters, reports, summaries, briefs, memos, anything written--means (1) you don't care, (2) you don't believe it and (3) I shouldn't read it--especially if I am a client, boss or other "editor".
Typos? Missing words? Bad documentation/citation? Horrible grammar? Long rambling inefficient sentences that tragically hide great ideas and points? Not getting to the point early enough? Lazy writing?
It all means you're either in deep personal crisis and should have someone else do it or, and much worse, you really hate what you are doing. You're telling me, the reader, "screw you, Jack". If the latter, it's time to make an application over at that cool shoe store, amusement park or gas station that would just love to have you.
Posted by JD Hull at March 13, 2009 11:59 PM
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These quotations come to mind:
“What is easy to read has been difficult to write. The labour of writing and rewriting, correcting and recorrecting, is the due exacted by every good book from its author, even if he knows from the beginning exactly what he wants to say. A limpid style is invariably the result of hard labour, and the easily flowing connection of sentence with sentence and paragraph with paragraph has always been won by the sweat of the brow.” — G. M. Trevelyan
“You can’t rely on inspiration. I don’t even believe in inspiration. I just believe in working.” — David Long
“The first draft of everything is shit.” — Ernest Hemingway
Posted by: Ray Ward at March 1, 2009 03:01 PM